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The Workshop Kit

A Ten Bad Pages Creative Writing Guide

$7

How to critique someone else’s story, survive having yours discussed, and turn a roomful of opinions into better writing.

You know what you meant to write. Workshop tells you what you actually wrote.

So, you’re going to workshop.

At some point your professor asks everyone to submit a story. Then the class reads them, sits in a circle and discusses them while the authors try to look like they’re having a normal afternoon.

The Workshop Kit is for that week. It covers both jobs: reading a classmate’s story closely enough to say something more useful than “I liked it,” and keeping quiet while your own story is discussed. Then it shows you how to turn a dozen opinions into a revision plan.

It works with whatever format your class uses. Follow your professor’s format, and your professor’s AI policy always wins.

What's inside

  • Giving feedback

    Read a classmate’s story twice, then write comments that name a moment, explain your reaction and give the writer something to work on.

  • Getting feedback

    What to submit, why not to apologize first, and how to listen while your story is discussed.

  • After workshop

    Sort a dozen opinions into patterns, separate reactions from prescriptions, and plan the revision before you touch the draft.

  • AI, honestly

    Two prompts that question your reading instead of writing it, and an example of AI getting it wrong.

Look inside

  • The page on writing useful critiques: weak and better versions of three workshop comments, and how to flip a disguised instruction.
    More Useful Than “I Liked It”
  • The page on having your own story workshopped: why not to interrupt, and what to ask when you finally get to talk.
    Shut Up and Listen
  • The page that translates common workshop comments, from “I didn’t connect with the character” to “show, don’t tell.”
    What Those Comments Actually Mean
  • A sample workshop: five comments turned into a four-step revision plan, starting with a common cause.
    Make a Revision Plan
  • The AI page: how to use AI to question your own reading and organize feedback, with two example prompts.
    We Get It. You Have AI.
  • The one-page Workshop Cheat Sheet: before workshop, giving feedback, receiving feedback, after workshop, and five questions worth asking.
    The Workshop Cheat Sheet

Inside the guide

  • How to read a classmate’s story, twice
  • Weak and better critique comments, side by side
  • How to turn a disguised instruction into useful feedback
  • What to submit, and what not to say before anyone reads it
  • What common workshop comments actually mean
  • A sample workshop turned into a four-step revision plan
  • What to keep, what to question and what to ignore
  • Using AI honestly, and an example of it getting things wrong
  • The Workshop Cheat Sheet, one page to bring to class
  • A three-part practice exercise
  • Printable PDF, 18 pages

Purchase includes one printable PDF. It’s a guide, not a fillable workbook: the exercises go in your notebook or writing app.

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