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Build a Character Who Wants Something

A Ten Bad Pages Creative Writing Guide

$7

How to give a character a want, a flaw and a hard choice, so they drive the story instead of living in their backstory.

Your character can have a fascinating backstory. Eventually, they’re going to have to do something.

So, you know everything about your character.

You know their favorite breakfast, their childhood nickname and what happened at their seventh birthday party. Excellent. Now what do they want?

Build a Character Who Wants Something is about the moment a character starts affecting what happens. It follows Summer, a high-school senior choosing between a college close to home and one across the country, through wants, conflict, flaws, avoidance and the decision she doesn’t want to make. No villain required.

You finish with an original scene and a character cheat sheet for your own work. It works with whatever your professor assigns; follow your professor’s format.

What's inside

  • Give them a want

    Turn a profile into an objective the character can pursue, and know the difference between a want and a need.

  • Conflict without a villain

    Let decent people’s desires collide, and find conflict in three places.

  • Flaws that cause trouble

    A flaw, or a strength taken too far, that makes things harder, and avoidance as a choice.

  • The choice that reveals them

    Take away the easy out and let the decision show who the character is.

Look inside

  • The page on character profiles: why a biography isn’t a plot, and how to make the details earn their place.
    A Character Isn’t a Biography
  • The page on objectives: want versus need, and how to make the want active.
    Give Your Character Something to Want
  • The page on conflict without a villain: three places to find it, and an exercise with no bad guys allowed.
    Make the Desires Collide
  • The page on flaws: letting the flaw do some work, and a strength taken too far.
    Give Them a Flaw That Causes Trouble
  • The page on pressure: what happens when the character’s old strategy stops working.
    Take Away the Easy Out
  • The one-page Character Cheat Sheet: want, motivation, contradiction, conflict, flaw, behavior, stakes, change and a character test.
    The Character Cheat Sheet

Inside the guide

  • Why a character profile isn’t a plot
  • Giving a protagonist a specific, active objective
  • The difference between a want and a need
  • Conflict without inventing a villain
  • Flaws, and strengths taken too far, that cause trouble
  • Revealing character through action and avoidance
  • Taking away the easy out
  • Making a choice reveal who a character is
  • A final assignment: the decision they don’t want to make
  • A revision pass and the Character Cheat Sheet
  • Printable PDF, 15 pages

Purchase includes one printable PDF. It’s a guide, not a fillable workbook: the exercises go in your notebook or writing app.

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